After reading a lot of stuff about kashmir's fate ,I had a dream last night from Kashmir .Kashmir,the place wrapped with blood bedsheet and I named my poem KASHMIR CALLING.Here are those words spoken to me last night ..............
I am Kashmir.
My land is bleeding,
My people are weeping
without taking a breath.
Death is dancing on our heads.
Eyes are so dry without any clue of tear.
Death like state of living,
life is curtained with fear.
No one can resque,
but firing their bullets.
Kids are orphaned.
Bodies are just in pieces,
which belongs to whom
cannot be explained.
Deep excruciating,
throbbing pain in my chest.
Only after death I can take rest
I am forgotten Kashmir.
I am shivering with pain and fear,
crying alone as no ear to hear.
OUT OF KASHMIR
People are deaf;
can't listen to wrathful cries.
People are blind;
can't see dying land.
People are dumb;
can't speak for Kashmir,
their tongue is numb.
People can't smell;
putrid mingled rotten bodies,
killing the noses.
People can't feel;
feel of Kashmir.
They are already dead souls.
I am Kashmir..........
I was a paradise ,once upon a time.
Once upon a time..........
You people said
'' dharti par kahi swarg to bas yahi hai''
gone are those days.
But now you are spitting on me
I am Kashmir.
I am ashamed of you;
prove me wrong if not though.
13 comments:
A very hard hitting traumatic feelings.
thanks sir .I felt that pain actually.kashmir needs support and this is just a little attempt to awake sleeping souls
such a sad state of affairs...
well portrayed
yes very true.
You writing has a matter of fact power .. Very well versed ... Bravoo...
Ritz..
www.delectableflavors.blogspot.com
A though provoking poem that addresses the pain and the plight of a state battling with fate..(rest can be left unsaid to prevent controversies filling up your comment page).
thanks ritz and wanderer for appreciating me.your words means alot to me .truely.
Very well said, nice post.Thanks for sharing such a feeling ..keep writing !!!
THANKS FOR INSPIRATION.
Nice one, Dr Pratibha.
My wife and I were in Kashmir in June before all the trouble erupted. It truly is heaven on earth.
It's sad to see the way things are coming along out there.
Here are couple of Kashmir related posts from our blog :
http://10yearitch.com/?tag=kashmir&paged=2
http://10yearitch.com/?tag=kashmir
Cheers,
Madhu
Thanks Madhu ,scenario in kashmir is really painful.
Very well described situation of Kashmir in ur poem...If I was in the media I'd surely be highlighting ur contribution...u hav a great talent..but yes the ground reality in kashmir is really worrying, its getting worse day by day.
Raghav thanks for beautiful inspiring words .Its feel great when someone appreciate you and encourage you and that too for a great cause.Kashmir is crying in pain lets see how many people have ears to listen to their cries.God bless them.
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