After reading a lot of stuff about kashmir's fate ,I had a dream last night from Kashmir .Kashmir,the place wrapped with blood bedsheet and I named my poem KASHMIR CALLING.Here are those words spoken to me last night ..............

                 I am Kashmir.
                 My land is bleeding,
              My people are weeping 

                   Crawling to death,
               without taking a breath.
          Death is dancing on our heads.

    Eyes are so dry without any clue of tear.
            Death like state of living,
            life is curtained with fear.

                    No one can resque,
                 but firing their bullets.

                     Kids are orphaned.
                 Bodies are just in pieces,
             which belongs to whom
                    cannot be explained.

                    Deep excruciating,
             throbbing pain in my chest.
         Only after death I can take rest

           I am forgotten Kashmir.
         I am shivering with pain and fear,
           crying alone as no ear to hear.

                     OUT OF KASHMIR
                        People are deaf;
              can't listen to wrathful cries.

                        People are blind;
                      can't see dying land.

                        People are dumb;
                  can't speak for Kashmir,
                     their tongue is numb.

                       People can't smell;
               putrid mingled rotten bodies,
                        killing the noses.

                       People can't feel;
                        feel of Kashmir.
              They are already dead souls.

                       I am Kashmir..........
        I was a paradise ,once upon a time.

                      Once upon a time.......... 
                      You people said
        '' dharti par kahi swarg to bas yahi hai''
                      gone are those days.
              But now you are spitting on me
                         I am Kashmir.
                  I am ashamed of you;
           prove me wrong if not though.


Shri Ram Ayyangar August 19, 2010 at 7:20 AM  

A very hard hitting traumatic feelings.

Pratibha The Talent August 19, 2010 at 7:29 AM  

thanks sir .I felt that pain actually.kashmir needs support and this is just a little attempt to awake sleeping souls

magiceye August 19, 2010 at 9:17 PM  

such a sad state of affairs...
well portrayed

Pratibha The Talent August 19, 2010 at 11:33 PM  

yes very true.

Ritz.. August 21, 2010 at 2:14 AM  

You writing has a matter of fact power .. Very well versed ... Bravoo...


wanderer August 21, 2010 at 5:11 AM  

A though provoking poem that addresses the pain and the plight of a state battling with fate..(rest can be left unsaid to prevent controversies filling up your comment page).

Pratibha The Talent August 21, 2010 at 10:31 PM  

thanks ritz and wanderer for appreciating me.your words means alot to me .truely.

Anonymous August 26, 2010 at 4:41 AM  

Very well said, nice post.Thanks for sharing such a feeling ..keep writing !!!

Pratibha The Talent August 26, 2010 at 4:49 AM  


Ten Year September 14, 2010 at 11:48 PM  

Nice one, Dr Pratibha.
My wife and I were in Kashmir in June before all the trouble erupted. It truly is heaven on earth.
It's sad to see the way things are coming along out there.

Here are couple of Kashmir related posts from our blog :


Pratibha The Talent September 15, 2010 at 2:24 AM  

Thanks Madhu ,scenario in kashmir is really painful.

Raghav September 16, 2010 at 8:19 AM  

Very well described situation of Kashmir in ur poem...If I was in the media I'd surely be highlighting ur contribution...u hav a great talent..but yes the ground reality in kashmir is really worrying, its getting worse day by day.

Pratibha The Talent September 16, 2010 at 10:06 PM  

Raghav thanks for beautiful inspiring words .Its feel great when someone appreciate you and encourage you and that too for a great cause.Kashmir is crying in pain lets see how many people have ears to listen to their cries.God bless them.

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