when I entered into new relationship

I never thought it would be that complex

whenever I thought; I know you

it became a myth

at times I thought you are so indifferent

so rude and insensitive

Perhaps I was right
your cold attitude

when I did not listened to you

the other day you sounded
you never sounded before
your caring and loving nature

felt the way I never felt before

believed that I am on the top of the world

so secure I was

the next day you burst with anger

forgot everything....

the love

holding tears in my eyes
I hide my self in me

securing my heart in right place

but today your gesture

your unspoken words

your moist eyes

said everything
which I wanted to hear
always

Glad I belong to you
and so proud of you
I wrote what I felt
but now I want to read
the silence
the laughter
the tears

and something about you and me

just you and me.........

Marriage is love hate relationship and like a wave it goes ,takes several turns .Just don't fall by those sharp turns and stand by it.So rise in love ; believe in you and those whom you love.The trust in relationship is foundation for healthy relationship.Just give some time and space and let the wound heal ,then you will find yourself where you wanted to be......and with whom you wanted to be with.......your soul mate.

so a little homework for my readers................

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34 comments:

Shri Ram Ayyangar February 2, 2011 at 2:55 AM: I like your final call-'Just don't fall by those sharp turns and stand by it.So rise in love '.But we are witnessing the 'fall' never to rise and stand again cases.
magiceye February 2, 2011 at 5:39 AM: well done!
best wishes for the contest!
Arti February 2, 2011 at 6:37 AM: This is so very well written... I love your writings...
All the best for the contest :)
Arpana February 2, 2011 at 6:55 AM: Lovely insight!
Mohini Puranik February 2, 2011 at 9:25 AM: beautifully expressed ..loved it Pratibha...very true name..suits u..:) best luck for the contest...
Medha February 2, 2011 at 9:30 AM: It was great feeling reading it. The words just flows like river and at the end you made a ocean of words making me drown deep in it and think over it.
aayanman February 2, 2011 at 2:30 PM: Hey, this was a nice read, the flow was good and the idea noble.
Cheers
GB
Balqis DBJ February 3, 2011 at 2:02 AM: Love this poem. Full of life!
Dr. Pratibha Singh February 3, 2011 at 2:28 AM: @shri ram sir-completely agree with you.

@magiceye-thanks!

@arti-you are so inspiring....thanks a lot.

@aparna-thanks dear
Dr. Pratibha Singh February 3, 2011 at 2:32 AM: @mohini-thanks for the beautiful compliment.

@pinky-thanks for inspiring words.

@gyanbaan-thanks for visiting my blog and hope you will visit again.

@balqis-so nice of you.thanks!
Geeta Singh February 3, 2011 at 4:09 AM: thats superb ...heartfelt wordings ..

keep smiling dear:)
Unknown February 3, 2011 at 5:06 AM: lovely!
keep writing Pratibha.
R-A-J February 3, 2011 at 7:40 AM: Hey Pratibha,

Good one.

Here's my story:

http://www.indiblogger.in/indipost.php?post=46697

Cheers!!

:)
Ritz.. February 3, 2011 at 8:21 AM: Hey,

Woww... it was very nice...Mast Hai

All the very best ..... read mine and vote for it if you like ...

http://delectableflavors.blogspot.com/2011/02/convenience-of-escapism.html

Ritz....
Poorvi February 3, 2011 at 8:56 AM: I don't have words :)
piyusa das February 3, 2011 at 9:46 AM: the way you have chosen words and structured them , really amazing
Nethra February 3, 2011 at 8:28 PM: Beautifully expressed. :)
Dr. Pratibha Singh February 4, 2011 at 2:02 AM: @Dr P S-Thanks sir,someone commenting from the same profession;its feel great.

@RAJ-Glad you liked it.
Dr. Pratibha Singh February 4, 2011 at 2:03 AM: @geeta-yur words means a lot to me and you know that.
Dr. Pratibha Singh February 4, 2011 at 2:05 AM: @Ritz-thanks for the wonderful comment and I liked your too and voted for the same.

@Poorvi-great to see you here.
Dr. Pratibha Singh February 4, 2011 at 2:06 AM: @Piyush-reading such a wonderful comment is even more amazing.

@Nethra-glad you liked it.
Alka Gurha February 4, 2011 at 5:28 AM: The talent shows...beautiful.
Mohan February 4, 2011 at 7:29 AM: Life!!! life is more beautiful when the blend of mixed emotions are felt atleast once and there starts a colorful new innings :)
Iti February 5, 2011 at 3:55 AM: hii...very beautiful one..so touchy..n nice message
Dr. Pratibha Singh February 7, 2011 at 2:03 AM: thanks Alka ,Mohan and iti for your valuable comment.
Ghumakkar Punit February 7, 2011 at 7:13 PM: Goose fleshed! :)
naimishika February 7, 2011 at 8:19 PM: love is like that... it is eternal..
Dr. Pratibha Singh February 8, 2011 at 4:16 AM: really Punit -thanks for the wonderful comment.

thanks naimishika for believing in it.
Raksha Bhat February 8, 2011 at 9:45 PM: I like the beautiful unpredictability of life,love and everything else that your lines are reflecting Pratibha:)...it made me smile:)
Dr. Pratibha Singh February 9, 2011 at 2:31 AM: thanks Raksha for giving me reason to smile.
Deguide February 19, 2011 at 3:36 AM: Time is a great healer Pratibha....good advice for couples
Tarun Mitra February 19, 2011 at 11:13 PM: Nice words good reading it :)
Dr. Pratibha Singh February 21, 2011 at 5:20 AM: @deguide-you are right.thanks!

@Tarun- thanks!
Chitz July 3, 2011 at 2:25 AM: good one...
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