She Left Me Undisturbed

''Mom you are so don't disturb me ''
those words were peeping in his mind repeatedly which he spoke to his mother lately ; when he saw his mother lying quietly on the floor.Why  is she so quiet now? He has taken his mother for granted and never bothered about her feelings.Always busy with work and his own world and never had thought of his mother .Thoughts in his mind created disturbances.........

She died.She left me undisturbed;
guilt beneath,
disturb me all the more.
I could feel her presence,
even if she is not anymore.
She left me insecure,
penalized me for not caring enough.
I was so busy, couldn't felt her aching heart;
her concerns for me,
thinking and providing comfort
to a non deserving son.
A mother who created me,
slept unconcerned.
Mom give me another chance;
you are the one to whom I belonged,
give me a reason to live ;
to live for you,
to wash off my guilt,
to make you a proud and happy mom.

Please come back..............

You have one life .....and that life is given by your Mom.
Don't wait for another might be the first and the last chance.
Value her the most as she is next to God.


YK November 18, 2010 at 10:40 PM  

Great poem...very touching.

Dr. Pratibha Singh November 19, 2010 at 12:43 AM  

thanks YK.

Bikram November 19, 2010 at 3:11 AM  

Ohhh YEs WHat a beautiful message in the end .. yes dont waste time .. Say what is in the heart ..
Say it to her cause like you say your life is given by her..
very nice ..


Indranil Bhattacharjee ........."सैल" November 19, 2010 at 5:43 AM  

Beautiful Poem !

Arpana November 21, 2010 at 7:49 AM  

a touchy account!

Dr. Pratibha Singh November 21, 2010 at 10:10 PM  

thanks Bikramjit,Indranil and Arpana

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