TO KOI BAAT BANE -GHAZAL COMPOSITION BY ME


किसी गिरते को उठाए तो कोई बात बने,
और रोते को हंसाये तो कोई बात बने

प्यार अपनों से तो हर कोई निभा लेता है
प्यार गैरों से निभाए तो कोई बात बने
और रोते को हंसाये तो कोई बात बने

कांटे राहों में बिछाना तो कोई बात नहीं,
फूल रहो में बिछाये तो कोई बात बने

और रोते को हंसाये तो कोई बात बने

हंसके खुशियों में हो जाती है दुनिया शामिल
किसी के  दुःख दर्द में काम आये तो कोई बात बने
और रोते को हंसाये तो कोई बात बने

राम अल्लाह को रिझाना तो मुबारक है मगर
उसके बन्दों को रिझाये तो कोई बात बने
और रोते को हंसाये तो कोई बात बने

8 comments:

Geeta Singh July 28, 2010 at 3:33 AM  

what a nice gazal....all the best :)

varsha July 28, 2010 at 5:20 AM  

Bahut khoob!!

Pratibha The Talent July 28, 2010 at 6:59 AM  

thankssssssssssss both of u.

सावधान July 28, 2010 at 12:14 PM  

Rote ko hansaye to baat bane !
bahut achha hai !
Dhanyawad !
http://savadhan.wordpress.com

A Restless Mind With A Sensitive Heart! July 29, 2010 at 2:48 AM  

Pratibha, must say, great going! bahut payaari gazal hai. insaniyat se bada hoi dharm nahi hota, so wonderfully presented.

am so glad to read ur poem dear, keep blogging!

actually is theraupic, even for me.

restless

Pratibha The Talent July 29, 2010 at 3:46 AM  

THANKS RESTLESS AND SIR.ghazale abhi aur bhi rahon mein dekhna hai pen kaha tak saath dega.aur aap logo ki inayat rahi to door talak jayegi.

Rachu July 31, 2010 at 4:43 PM  

bohot achchi poem hai didi....i loved the last stanza most

Pratibha The Talent August 8, 2010 at 9:09 AM  

thanks rachu dear.

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