Who You Are?


Life and its shade
canvased by god
God made it beautiful

But we are
adding shades of greys and black
enveloping the sky
turning fog into smog

Putting solute
in water bodies
that are not dispersible
making it turbid
mislaying its transparency
water is not pure anymore

Deforestation
converting the forest
into the barren land
beautiful landscapes are mechanized
by man
buildings and more building
watching stars sounds bookish
nature is losing its charm

Emotions are blowing over
relationships changing
accepting changes
changing our own self
mirrors are showing
someone else image
and asking you
who you are?

10 comments:

Marinela Reka January 20, 2011 at 7:17 AM  

So touching and so heartfelt!
Short Poems

magiceye January 20, 2011 at 7:34 AM  

dont mind me saying it but your i love your hindi poetry a lot more..
i think you should write more in hindi...

Sumit Sarkar January 20, 2011 at 11:56 AM  

very powerful poem..i loved it :)

Rajesh January 20, 2011 at 1:23 PM  

Beautifully woven.

Bikramjit January 21, 2011 at 3:50 AM  

hmmm yeah sometimes the man in the mirror does ask WHO ARE YOU .....

Bikram's

Mohinee January 21, 2011 at 9:56 AM  

So Deep and touching! Wanna read and think again and again. :)

Shri Ram Ayyangar January 21, 2011 at 9:24 PM  

Cutting the trees, widening the roads
reclaiming water bodies, building skyscrapers
throwing plastics bags in gutters, choking a life!

Desi Babu January 22, 2011 at 7:20 AM  

Very nice and heartfelt writing.

Beyond Horizon January 25, 2011 at 2:01 AM  

True...naming as modernization...forgetting the nature...the creator...we do suffocate it...but it will suffocate us...Even after understanding Knowledge is power...We forget it

Brilliantly quoted!

Pratibha The Talent January 28, 2011 at 5:24 AM  

thanks everybody,thanks for inspiring me.

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