एक शाख पर बैठी थी वो
पैरो को जमा कर बैठी थी
बैठी थी एक आस में
किसी की तलाश में
वो रूठी थी अपने आप से
सहमी थी हर आहात से
हर तरफ बहती हवाएं
उसके सहमे पंखों को हिलाए
एक दाना किस को दू
इस सोच में बैठी थी
एक शोर में वोह बिखर गयी
एक गोली का शिकार हो गयी
उफ़ न निकल पाई
बेरहमी किसी को थी
और वो सो गयी
अपने खून में लतपथ
अपने पंखो को ओढ़कर
वो सो गयी
15 comments:
poignant specially the last verse
beautiful
Ek Chidiye ki vyatha katha ko bakhoobi likha hai.
Wonderful-
Now i will have to count your versatility,lovely!
very touching to the heart. real pain can be felt in your writings.
sheer speechless i am.
aww...i didnt see the ending coming that way...
but a good attempt. very good in fact.
Very touching!
Evocative...heart hugging!
@magiceye-thanks for the encouragement.
@Shri Ram Ayyangar Sir-accha laga aapko chidiya ki vyatha katha pasand aayi.
@Cindy-welcome to my blog and thanks for the wonderful comment.
@Arpana-believe me its an overwhelming response.
@Pramod-thanks a ton and such comments inspire me so much.
@Always happy-your visit makes me happy ...really! keep visiting.
@Mohinee-Glad you like it.
@Alka Guha-great to hear from you and liked your comment.
ohhhhhhhhh but why wud anyone want to hurt such a beautiful bird.... i hate such people
beautifully written
Bikram's
wow pratibha! so tender and touching :)
btw , congratulations for all those awards, u deserve em :D
sarah
@Bikramjit-their are people ,you know!
@Sarah-oh! thats really sweet of you dear.thanks!!!!!
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