And Then She Slept......hindi poem

एक शाख पर बैठी थी वो
पैरो को जमा कर बैठी थी

बैठी थी एक आस में
किसी की तलाश में

वो रूठी थी अपने आप से
सहमी थी हर आहात से

हर तरफ बहती हवाएं
उसके सहमे पंखों को हिलाए

एक दाना किस को दू
इस सोच में बैठी थी

एक शोर में वोह बिखर गयी
एक गोली का शिकार हो गयी

उफ़ न निकल पाई
बेरहमी किसी को थी
और वो सो गयी
अपने खून में लतपथ
अपने पंखो को ओढ़कर
वो सो गयी


magiceye January 16, 2011 at 9:37 PM  

poignant specially the last verse

Shri Ram Ayyangar January 17, 2011 at 2:38 AM  

Ek Chidiye ki vyatha katha ko bakhoobi likha hai.

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Arpana January 17, 2011 at 8:32 AM  

Now i will have to count your versatility,lovely!

Anonymous January 17, 2011 at 11:23 AM  

very touching to the heart. real pain can be felt in your writings.
sheer speechless i am.

Always Happy January 17, 2011 at 1:03 PM  

aww...i didnt see the ending coming that way...

but a good attempt. very good in fact.

Mohinee January 17, 2011 at 10:43 PM  

Very touching!

Alka Gurha January 18, 2011 at 12:27 AM  

Evocative...heart hugging!

Pratibha The Talent January 18, 2011 at 1:41 AM  

@magiceye-thanks for the encouragement.

@Shri Ram Ayyangar Sir-accha laga aapko chidiya ki vyatha katha pasand aayi.

Pratibha The Talent January 18, 2011 at 1:43 AM  

@Cindy-welcome to my blog and thanks for the wonderful comment.

@Arpana-believe me its an overwhelming response.

Pratibha The Talent January 18, 2011 at 1:45 AM  

@Pramod-thanks a ton and such comments inspire me so much.

@Always happy-your visit makes me happy ...really! keep visiting.

Pratibha The Talent January 18, 2011 at 1:47 AM  

@Mohinee-Glad you like it.

@Alka Guha-great to hear from you and liked your comment.

Bikramjit January 18, 2011 at 5:58 AM  

ohhhhhhhhh but why wud anyone want to hurt such a beautiful bird.... i hate such people

beautifully written


subtlescribbler January 19, 2011 at 12:57 AM  

wow pratibha! so tender and touching :)
btw , congratulations for all those awards, u deserve em :D


Pratibha The Talent January 19, 2011 at 9:37 PM  

@Bikramjit-their are people ,you know!

@Sarah-oh! thats really sweet of you dear.thanks!!!!!

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