waiting



This place have been the ducky meeting spot, though looks like a haunted place, for Amy and Sam; they used to spend times together their for hours.Their was romance in the air and waves were  singing love songs.Everything was so perfect ....Amy gave her creative touches to this house and she used to stayed their long hours for waiting for her beloved , in fact she used to love waiting as she always had reached that place hours before the meeting time.She used to put flowers in the flower vase, clean up and decorating that place ,spraying room freshner to freshen up the ambiance. She was one of her own kind. She used to greet her lover with a warm hug and talking for hours.....eating in candle light [as their was no power] than dancing together.

Life was like a fairy tale to her.One day Sam told Amy that he has some urgent work and need to go out for five days.Amy was disheartened by the thought that how could she live without him for five days,Amy was forcing him to stay or to take her with him. He denied because of urgency to go.She cried a lot tried to stop him but all in vain he left her waiting in their favorite place.

She waited for him and every second was like years for her.She loved him from core of her heart.She never realized someone was following her.When she went to her favorite place, she realized someone is following her but when she turned back she could not see anything.She was scared but started moving fast towards that place.
This time she heard footsteps but once she turned nothing was there.She was scared to death and started running towards that place, finally she reached there and took a deep breath.She started writing what she was feeling for her lover.

Then some force stopped her from writing and stabbed knife on her back and quickly went away.Now she wasn't scared but she wanted to write something for her lover

''waiting for you 
leaving me betrayed
wanted to live more
to wait for you


you owe me
people bowed me
force me
taught me new lessons of life


they said to forget you
to throw you away
from my thought
indeed,I waited for you


you promised to come back 
i told you not to go
you left me on my fate


a knife entered my back
i could not see that face
but i know it was you


my hands are shaking
my breath is breathing 
i will come back


i will back 
to look into your eyes 
to ask you the reason
for taking my life.''




Sam was scared to be caught by the police and went to that place in the middle of night to destroy all the proof and her dead body too.He started laughing when found a blood soaked letter and said Amy you were such a fool but I enjoyed your company.You were asking too much from me....commitment.But when he entered that place where he killed her, he couldn't see her dead body instead a girl was sitting with her face covered and sparkling red eyes.Those eyes were very innocent when alive but this time instead of tears blood was dripping through her eyes.She was silently looking into his eyes for answers.


But she never needed his answer though, he was not worth giving a chance .She came with the speed of light and hugged him so tightly that he could not breathe. She hugged him to death and still she is waiting inside and sometimes peep out of her favorite place ...........to hug or to tell her story.









Warning-enter at your own risk


disclaimer-this story is just a trigger to mystery in imagination and a piece of fiction.


"This post is written for BLOGESHWAR (link to the facebook page) and Anubhooti (link to anubhooti.com)

10 comments:

Md. Muddassir Shah December 3, 2010 at 4:47 AM  

Pratibha,
That is a nice story about betrayal and revenge.
I loved it.
You need to make few grammatical corrections and voila it is a good story.

:) good luck with contest.

P.S: it has been long since I last visited your blog. Kind of busy now, will read the other posts over the weekend :)

Pratibha The Talent December 3, 2010 at 5:34 AM  

thanks Muddaisir,I corrected his/her and a few grammatical mistakes and thanks a lot for mentioning it.Great to hear such an honest comments and I appreciate it.

subtlescribbler December 4, 2010 at 1:08 AM  

hey pratibha!
sad story.the ending was scary but justified to some extent.
good work..all the best :)

sarah

Md. Muddassir Shah December 4, 2010 at 8:42 PM  

:) You have done amazing job with both the posts.
My Blogaton entry was conceived and written in 50 minutes to be precise, I hope you like that. :)

Pratibha The Talent December 6, 2010 at 8:42 PM  

thanks a ton Muddaissir and surely visit yours.

Geeta Singh December 9, 2010 at 7:01 AM  

i loved it ..well done sis

AdiSin December 9, 2010 at 11:31 AM  

i'm just being honest, I don't think it was scary enough, but still...i liked the story line of your story about love and revenge and your imagination about how the ghost killed SAM embracing him so hard.

Pratibha The Talent December 9, 2010 at 7:30 PM  

@Geeta-thanks for encouraging words sis.


@ADISIN-I appreciate your honest opinion and thanks for liking the story line.

OP December 11, 2010 at 11:20 AM  

liked it !!!

Pratibha The Talent December 12, 2010 at 8:14 PM  

thanks OP.

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