Unwinding old thoughts
Coming up with the new ideas
Rejuvenating my own soul
Blessings of New Year waiting ahead
A knock on the door
Will be heard soon
Cyclone of thoughts calming down
Chirping of birds
Sounds distinctly
Stirred thoughts to proper consistency
Dissolving the unsolved matters
Transparency is yet to be achieved
But the process is going on
Music sounds relaxing to hear
Senses working even better
Jolted mish mash cleared up
Life seems to be better
Breathing pattern improved
Smile wants to spend life on lips
Tears said goodbye
Song on lips started with humming
Hesitated to enjoy
From fear of losing it
Want to hug New Year
With a hope of happiness around
With a hope of becoming a better person
Lets say goodbye and thanks to 2010
And welcome New Year 2011
Wish you all a very happy new year
This post is written for BLOGESHWAR (link to the facebook page) and Anubhooti (link to anubhooti.com)
42 comments:
you got the answers for the questions in your last post...very much inspiring and motivating...
"Smile wants to spend life on lips"...LOVELY
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU :)
//Stirred thoughts to proper consistency
Dissolving the unsolved matters
Transparency is yet to be achieved
But the process is going on//
Wow....Beautiful thoughts...!
And, you turned them into words excellently..!
These four lines have
Pains of Past (Stirred thoughts),
Attempts on Present (Dissolving),
Aim on mind about future (Transparency),
Confidence to win the situations (Going on).
Pratibha..! Amazed literally...!
//Life seems to be better
Breathing pattern improved//
Have given a Dr's touch here too...!
Happy New Year to you too, Pratibha!!!
Lovely post...
"Unwinding old thoughts
Coming up with the new ideas
Rejuvenating my own soul"..
This is brilliant.. :)
May the all wishes blossom at their best! Heartiest and warm wishes to you!
love the positivity in the post!
all the best wishes for the new year!!
cheers!!
Thanks Poonam for the support and glad you liked my earlier post and this one too.
@Satish kumar-very intelligently and thoughtfully you elaborated the embedded meaning of my poem.glad you just don't read through eyes and very few people are blessed with that kind of vision and understanding.god bless you and thanks a ton for appreciating beyond words.
@Sumit-thanks for the appreciation and glad you believed in it.
@Arpana and Magiceye-My heartiest wishes are always with you and thanks for inspiring me and I feel great when you people appreciate.
Lovely poem Prathiba!
Happy New Year to you!
Good bye 2010 and welcome to a brand new decade. Have a wonderful years ahead!
Thanks Mam ,Happy New Year to you too.
Thanks Lakshmi Rajan and wish you a great year ahead.
happy new year pratibha
hey pls dnt mind me saying this but u shouldnt have been a Doc. u write really well sweety.
happy new year
i m glad that i dropped by to chk this post
really sweet
Happy New Year Mag.
@Nandita-glad you visited and thats a huge compliment I must say.I am already following you for your writing skills and would love to see you again commenting on my posts.thanks!
happy new year dear
Happy New Year SIS.
'With a hope of becoming a better person'
Wow... so much cheer and goodness...
Wish you a very Happy New Year :)
Happy New Year and nice change in blog background.
Thanks Arti for appreciation; wishes and wish you the same.
Thanks for noticing it and wish you a very Happy New Year Sir.
@Muskan-Happy New Year to you too.
wish you a very happy 2011
Simply Beautiful!
Thanks Ruhisonal for appreciating my poem.
@Harish-same to you.
Happy New Year Prathiba. May 2011 brings all the best and beautiful things to you and your loved ones!! CHEERS!!!
same to you Kranjini and thanks fore the wishes.
Hi Pratibha,
Thanks for the inspiring comments , wow you have given such a great outlook on leaving 2010 and the upcoming big 2011 via a nice poem , loved it beauty and nature connect.
Wish you and your family a very Happy and prosperous new year 2011.
Take care
Keep smiling :)
Vivek
@vivek-Thanks for the appreciation and wish you and your family a very Happy New Year 2011.
Pratibha,
Happy new year to you too :)
This is one of the best New Year post I've read around, I loved the last two lines.
Keep writing, and wishing you luck and success for the year :)
great to hear such words;Wish you a very happy new year and happy blogging.
Happy new year Muddaisir.
great thought, my post is somewhat similar to urs but i loved ur poem more :)
good luck for the contest..may the new year bring in lots of happy moments in ur life!
sarah
quite a refreshing poem.. much optimism n life.. god bless u n have a fantastic year ahead..
@subtlescribbler-thanks dear and wish you the same.
@easyvivek-thanks for the appreciation and great wishes.Happy New Year to you too.
Liked it :) happy new year to u too
thanks Omi.
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