Took My Breath Away

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This post have been barracked by movie'' Jab We  Met '' specially that scene when train was about to left and I can't forget words by kareena kapoor in Jab We Met when she managed to crusade the train with Shahid Kapoor that'' accha hua ki meri train nahi miss hui ,pichale kai dino se mujhe sapne aa rahe hai ki meri train miss ho gayi hai ''and then she smiled on conquering her biggest fears as she finally managed to be in train.Again she mentioned when she fell in love with Shahid Kapoor but  her ex-lover for whom she left her home proposed her and apologized for his mistake ,at the same time again she felt that she will miss the train again.
Why again and again I mentioned train here now I hereby would like to elaborate ''fear of losing  someone you love is like loosing train''and it is a breath taking moment  as if you would miss this train you will never reach your destination.

When you start feeling little something for someone and if you see that person right in front of you suddenly you feel this world have stopped for a moment .........everything is still so is the breath,its an amazing feeling ;failing newton's law of gravitational pull as you are not pulled by gravity but by someone else.When you fall in love,you start flying in the air,suddenly you start loving your boring surrounding,you feel like floating in the middle of something.When you get an opportunity to see that person your heart start palpitating,short of breath,amnesic and sometime suffer from insomnia .......excuse me I am not talking about any disease but this is love .Love shows such symptoms but only his/her lover can treat him/her.Love is like a cool breeze on face and felt with eyes closed .I don't know exactly what is the correlation of rain with love but rain sounds romantic.Falling in love sounds great.... isn't it?

But imagine if somehow you realize that your love is one sided and find the person whom you loved (for whom you were floating in the air against  gravitational theory of Newton )with someone else in love, you suddenly pulled by gravity and you confront yourself on the floor.I know, that one is heart breaking and smashed  all your dream in a while.But life is a bed of roses with thorns in it.I know reading it is taking your breath away ...its sad here but it is like this way only.Here are some lines from broken heart.......

Took my breath away....
When I saw you that day,
but you never say;
that you are on your way.

Took my breath away.....
You are one in crowd;
but words I never found,
that feeling couldn't sound.

Took my breath away.....
Dealing with heart break,
so bad it ache;
You moved away;
and you took my breath away....

This post is fictional and purely inspired my movies that took my breath away.


magiceye October 1, 2010 at 2:04 AM  

wonderful expression of love emotions :)

Pratibha The Talent October 1, 2010 at 4:02 AM  

thanks magiceye gor wonderful comment.

Anonymous October 1, 2010 at 9:01 AM  

ah..nothing like love to take one's breath away!
good luck for the contest..

Arti October 2, 2010 at 1:10 AM  

A lovely post... Beautiful poem.
the emotions came out really nicely:)

Arpana October 2, 2010 at 6:21 AM  

Nice blend of science ,love and after effect. Innovative angle!

ritesh October 2, 2010 at 7:14 AM  

Hi...I m a new follower of u. Got u through Shreya. U sound like a runaway-girl forlorn in love..Ur poem had sum element of child-like restlessness... sumthing that i alwez value above all.
I opened my blog as well a few days beck. Hope u will follow me.- Ritesh

Pratibha The Talent October 4, 2010 at 11:27 PM  

@whispering silence-thanks and same to you.

Pratibha The Talent October 5, 2010 at 12:06 AM  

@Arti and Arpana-thanks for believing and understanding different aspects of my view point.

Pratibha The Talent October 5, 2010 at 12:10 AM  

@Ritesh-Welcome to my blog and thanks for giving your precious time on my blog.I am also new to blogging and started blogging since july end and would like to improve further.I really appreciate honest comments.

Anonymous October 9, 2010 at 12:51 PM  

this is good.. i can see a constant improvisation in ur writing.. keep the spirit up.. a good plot n very truly said.. one-sided love is very painful and getting mutual love is like catching a train.. its so close all the time.. the poem was nice.. over all, very good..

RaNiiiiii October 9, 2010 at 6:26 PM  

very nice post Pratibha..

Pratibha The Talent October 10, 2010 at 6:45 AM  

thanks Rani and vivek.

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