Sunday, April 3, 2011

The Journey

"This Poem has been written for BLOGJUNTA NaPoWriMo"

http://blogjunta.com/index.php?option=com_tpdugg&task=detail&id=418




Yesterday night I had a dream
a dream that was sweet enough to make me smile
a journey from earth to moon
not via jet but via my winged bicycle
weird but sweet
riding on a path of flowers
clouds curtained the side ways
entered through the rainbow
mesmerized in that atmosphere
someone was sitting on moon
gave me hand and hold it delicately
we both were holding hands
and flying against newton's law
we were sailing in the air with our own laws and desires
no frictional force of wind could move us apart
a journey of love to fall in love
to a person who was stranger yet so familiar
romantic breeze was disturbing my tresses
his glance on my face made me blush
love was flowing in the veins
a silent music of love
was connecting us
white floor of clouds without any roof
no walls but an open place to take a deep breath
everything so relaxing
enchanting my soul
I wish this journey would continue throughout life
I don't want to open my eyes
I want to be in that state of dream
but my stupid alarm clock snoozed
disturbed the silent music
things disappeared in a while
opened my eyes and realized
it was a dream, a sweet dream indeed.
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25 comments:

  1. SimranApril 1, 2011 at 7:56 AM

    And a sweet poem indeed :)
    Wow! beautifully expressed ..
    Take care!
    Do read my world cup poem!

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  2. T F CarthickApril 2, 2011 at 8:46 PM

    Lovel romantic poem. So vividly written. Enjoyed it.

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  3. Vinay Leo R.April 2, 2011 at 9:13 PM

    nice romantic poetry, Pratibha! liked it..

    btw, u forgot to add the blockquotes, and have posted it three days ahead of the other Blog-a-Tonics as well.. hmm..

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  4. Someone is SpecialApril 3, 2011 at 1:18 AM

    a sweet dream Pratibha.. Romantic.. mine is a dream a journey of...

    Someone is Special

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  5. m7April 3, 2011 at 9:41 AM

    lovely poem. and i love the new template of the blog too. both are very sweet. :)

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  6. D2April 4, 2011 at 2:31 AM

    Nice poem. I liked the metaphors that you chose to use in the beginning of the poem.

    All the best for BAT.

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  7. SimranApril 4, 2011 at 4:15 AM

    I have something for you!
    Do check it on my blog :)

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  8. Vinay Leo R.April 4, 2011 at 10:39 AM

    hi Pratibha, a really nice poem, romantic and well expressed.. please change your timestamp to April 3, and add the necessary blockquotes, else I cannot accept any votes that are given for this by other entrants!

    Here's My Blog-a-Ton Journey

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  9. Vinay Leo R.April 4, 2011 at 11:46 PM

    umm, the change of date is possible still :) u can click on edit post, and under post options you'll find an option "scheduled at". u can select that and edit the date :)

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  10. Beyond HorizonApril 5, 2011 at 12:42 AM

    Sweet and beautiful world of Dreams! :)
    May the silent music of love continue playing in reality too :)

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  11. SureindranApril 5, 2011 at 8:37 AM

    A very nice poem! Keep writing.

    Sureindran
    www.sureindran.com

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  12. Dr. Pratibha SinghApril 5, 2011 at 11:26 PM

    thanks all for your kind support.

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  13. Dr. Pratibha SinghApril 5, 2011 at 11:26 PM

    I have changed the date of this post. thanks for all the help Vinay!

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  14. Alka GurhaApril 6, 2011 at 4:19 AM

    fresh and vivid....

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  15. aativasApril 8, 2011 at 3:57 AM

    Sweet dream indeed!

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  16. Geeta SinghApril 8, 2011 at 10:50 AM

    lovely, beautiful , romantic poem^_^

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  17. AmityApril 8, 2011 at 11:37 PM

    Grrrr...I hate that alarm clock too! It disturbs my journey with your beautiful poem...I see myself wafting with the clouds too and I could visualize that romantic interlude you've had with that someone over there!

    And I felt romantic too! Wow! this is soooooooo good a journey in a poem!

    I love it! ATB!!! :)

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  18. Yamini MeduriApril 9, 2011 at 12:49 PM

    sweetest dream and a beautiful post in a cute blog..!!!

    n yeah i really hate the alarms...one day i was about to see my Dream boy's face when it started ringing..!!!

    very cute post dear..!!!


    All the best for BAT..!!!

    Heres mine..!!

    Yamini Meduri - Journey

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  19. TeamgsquareApril 11, 2011 at 8:08 PM

    I too hate alarm clocks

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  20. Sarah malikApril 12, 2011 at 4:42 AM

    aww...Alarm clocks r such a spoilsport :x
    Sometimes i wish i cud just lie down n dream on, eyes close or open but no ticking of the clock..
    wonderfully written poem:)

    sarah

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  21. Prateek BagriApril 12, 2011 at 9:45 AM

    Mushy-mushy!!

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  22. ArtiApril 12, 2011 at 10:10 PM

    I wanted more! So Beautiful and refreshing...These alarm clocks... urgh!!!

    PS: Missed you, Glad to have you back :-)

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  23. RimlyApril 20, 2011 at 1:31 AM

    Congratulation! What a romantic poem and oooof the alarm had to go!!!!

    http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/04/one-of-those-days.html

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  24. RachitApril 24, 2011 at 1:05 PM

    insightful and interesting poem.. :)

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  25. IrfanuddinMay 4, 2011 at 6:19 AM

    very true....before its too late think about yourself.....sometimes we just forget, who we are?? while pursuing other's cause.

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