Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Love Hate Relationship

when I entered into new relationship
I never thought it would be that complex
whenever I thought; I know you
it became a myth
at times I thought you are so indifferent
so rude and insensitive
Perhaps I was right
your cold attitude
when I did not listened to you

the other day you sounded
you never sounded before
your caring and loving nature
felt the way I never felt before
believed that I am on the top of the world
so secure I was 

the next day you burst with anger
forgot everything....
the love
holding tears in my eyes
I hide  my self in me
securing my heart in right place

but today your gesture
your unspoken words
your moist eyes
said everything
which I wanted to hear
always

Glad I belong to you
and so proud of you
I wrote  what I felt
but now I want to read
the silence
the laughter
the tears
and something about you and me
just you and me.........

Marriage is love hate relationship and like a wave it goes ,takes several turns .Just don't fall by those sharp turns and stand by it.So rise in love ; believe in you and those whom you love.The trust in relationship is foundation for healthy relationship.Just give some time and space and let the wound heal ,then you will find yourself where you wanted to be......and with whom you wanted to be with.......your soul mate.
 
so a little homework for my readers................


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34 comments:

  1. Shri Ram AyyangarFebruary 2, 2011 at 2:55 AM

    I like your final call-'Just don't fall by those sharp turns and stand by it.So rise in love '.But we are witnessing the 'fall' never to rise and stand again cases.

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  2. magiceyeFebruary 2, 2011 at 5:39 AM

    well done!
    best wishes for the contest!

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  3. ArtiFebruary 2, 2011 at 6:37 AM

    This is so very well written... I love your writings...
    All the best for the contest :)

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  4. ArpanaFebruary 2, 2011 at 6:55 AM

    Lovely insight!

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  5. Mohini PuranikFebruary 2, 2011 at 9:25 AM

    beautifully expressed ..loved it Pratibha...very true name..suits u..:) best luck for the contest...

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  6. MedhaFebruary 2, 2011 at 9:30 AM

    It was great feeling reading it. The words just flows like river and at the end you made a ocean of words making me drown deep in it and think over it.

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  7. aayanmanFebruary 2, 2011 at 2:30 PM

    Hey, this was a nice read, the flow was good and the idea noble.
    Cheers
    GB

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  8. Balqis DBJFebruary 3, 2011 at 2:02 AM

    Love this poem. Full of life!

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  9. Dr. Pratibha SinghFebruary 3, 2011 at 2:28 AM

    @shri ram sir-completely agree with you.

    @magiceye-thanks!

    @arti-you are so inspiring....thanks a lot.

    @aparna-thanks dear

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  10. Dr. Pratibha SinghFebruary 3, 2011 at 2:32 AM

    @mohini-thanks for the beautiful compliment.

    @pinky-thanks for inspiring words.

    @gyanbaan-thanks for visiting my blog and hope you will visit again.

    @balqis-so nice of you.thanks!

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  11. Geeta SinghFebruary 3, 2011 at 4:09 AM

    thats superb ...heartfelt wordings ..

    keep smiling dear:)

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  12. UnknownFebruary 3, 2011 at 5:06 AM

    lovely!
    keep writing Pratibha.

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  13. R-A-JFebruary 3, 2011 at 7:40 AM

    Hey Pratibha,

    Good one.

    Here's my story:

    http://www.indiblogger.in/indipost.php?post=46697

    Cheers!!

    :)

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  14. Ritz..February 3, 2011 at 8:21 AM

    Hey,

    Woww... it was very nice...Mast Hai

    All the very best ..... read mine and vote for it if you like ...

    http://delectableflavors.blogspot.com/2011/02/convenience-of-escapism.html

    Ritz....

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  15. PoorviFebruary 3, 2011 at 8:56 AM

    I don't have words :)

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  16. piyusa dasFebruary 3, 2011 at 9:46 AM

    the way you have chosen words and structured them , really amazing

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  17. NethraFebruary 3, 2011 at 8:28 PM

    Beautifully expressed. :)

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  18. Dr. Pratibha SinghFebruary 4, 2011 at 2:02 AM

    @Dr P S-Thanks sir,someone commenting from the same profession;its feel great.

    @RAJ-Glad you liked it.

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  19. Dr. Pratibha SinghFebruary 4, 2011 at 2:03 AM

    @geeta-yur words means a lot to me and you know that.

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  20. Dr. Pratibha SinghFebruary 4, 2011 at 2:05 AM

    @Ritz-thanks for the wonderful comment and I liked your too and voted for the same.

    @Poorvi-great to see you here.

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  21. Dr. Pratibha SinghFebruary 4, 2011 at 2:06 AM

    @Piyush-reading such a wonderful comment is even more amazing.

    @Nethra-glad you liked it.

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  22. Alka GurhaFebruary 4, 2011 at 5:28 AM

    The talent shows...beautiful.

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  23. MohanFebruary 4, 2011 at 7:29 AM

    Life!!! life is more beautiful when the blend of mixed emotions are felt atleast once and there starts a colorful new innings :)

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  24. ItiFebruary 5, 2011 at 3:55 AM

    hii...very beautiful one..so touchy..n nice message

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  25. Dr. Pratibha SinghFebruary 7, 2011 at 2:03 AM

    thanks Alka ,Mohan and iti for your valuable comment.

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  26. Ghumakkar PunitFebruary 7, 2011 at 7:13 PM

    Goose fleshed! :)

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  27. naimishikaFebruary 7, 2011 at 8:19 PM

    love is like that... it is eternal..

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  28. Dr. Pratibha SinghFebruary 8, 2011 at 4:16 AM

    really Punit -thanks for the wonderful comment.

    thanks naimishika for believing in it.

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  29. Raksha BhatFebruary 8, 2011 at 9:45 PM

    I like the beautiful unpredictability of life,love and everything else that your lines are reflecting Pratibha:)...it made me smile:)

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  30. Dr. Pratibha SinghFebruary 9, 2011 at 2:31 AM

    thanks Raksha for giving me reason to smile.

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  31. DeguideFebruary 19, 2011 at 3:36 AM

    Time is a great healer Pratibha....good advice for couples

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  32. Tarun MitraFebruary 19, 2011 at 11:13 PM

    Nice words good reading it :)

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  33. Dr. Pratibha SinghFebruary 21, 2011 at 5:20 AM

    @deguide-you are right.thanks!

    @Tarun- thanks!

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  34. ChitzJuly 3, 2011 at 2:25 AM

    good one...
    hearmy gadget speak

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