Sunday, January 16, 2011

And Then She Slept......hindi poem














एक शाख पर बैठी थी वो
पैरो को जमा कर बैठी थी

बैठी थी एक आस में
किसी की तलाश में

वो रूठी थी अपने आप से
सहमी थी हर आहात से

हर तरफ बहती हवाएं
उसके सहमे पंखों को हिलाए

एक दाना किस को दू
इस सोच में बैठी थी

एक शोर में वोह बिखर गयी
एक गोली का शिकार हो गयी

उफ़ न निकल पाई
बेरहमी किसी को थी
और वो सो गयी
अपने खून में लतपथ
अपने पंखो को ओढ़कर
वो सो गयी

15 comments:

  1. poignant specially the last verse
    beautiful

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  2. Ek Chidiye ki vyatha katha ko bakhoobi likha hai.

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  3. Now i will have to count your versatility,lovely!

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  4. very touching to the heart. real pain can be felt in your writings.
    sheer speechless i am.

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  5. aww...i didnt see the ending coming that way...

    but a good attempt. very good in fact.

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  6. @magiceye-thanks for the encouragement.

    @Shri Ram Ayyangar Sir-accha laga aapko chidiya ki vyatha katha pasand aayi.

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  7. @Cindy-welcome to my blog and thanks for the wonderful comment.

    @Arpana-believe me its an overwhelming response.

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  8. @Pramod-thanks a ton and such comments inspire me so much.

    @Always happy-your visit makes me happy ...really! keep visiting.

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  9. @Mohinee-Glad you like it.

    @Alka Guha-great to hear from you and liked your comment.

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  10. ohhhhhhhhh but why wud anyone want to hurt such a beautiful bird.... i hate such people

    beautifully written

    Bikram's

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  11. wow pratibha! so tender and touching :)
    btw , congratulations for all those awards, u deserve em :D


    sarah

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  12. @Bikramjit-their are people ,you know!

    @Sarah-oh! thats really sweet of you dear.thanks!!!!!

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