Changing people faster than time
going along with instinct
may prove you a fool
chasing myself ,understanding self
difficult than understanding anything
wandering thoughts
emphasizing murmur
shimmering ideas
haunting minds
plucking souls
curtained feelings
bothering so much
taking shelter under pierced roof
rains are no longer inspiring
instead poring drops of miseries
changing clothes but
wearing same thoughts
crawling on mind once again
scratching me from myself
inspiration still holding my hand
pulling me towards hope
burying the old thoughts
healing the scratched wounds
grafting the burning scars
bringing new skin to the surface
loving to be in new skin
comfortable within
smiling again to the life
climbing the ladder carefully
promising myself to grow
encouraging myself not to stop in between
persistently moving against the wind.
way to go!!
ReplyDeleteVery nicely put, could identify myself with it
ReplyDeletesuperb!!! as always:)
ReplyDeletegood good...like the positivity! ''climbing the ladder caerfully, promising myself to grow''...thumbs up. Good luck
ReplyDeleteloved the words...Inspiring as always :)
ReplyDeleteOptimism is infectious..way to go!
ReplyDelete@magiceye,bbsearching self,geeta-thanks for encouraging me.
ReplyDelete@always happy-so inspiring of you.
ReplyDelete@RAjesh-thanks a lot.
@beyond horizon and alka guha-loved to hear such words from you.
Deep and thorough introspection...!
ReplyDeleteEspecially,
//wandering thoughts
emphasizing murmur
shimmering ideas
haunting minds//
Optimistically going against them..!
With knowing one own contents...!
If it reflects you,then..
I can say..
You have won them already, Pratibha...!
inspiration still holding my hand
ReplyDeletepulling me towards hope....
Great words.. Very inspirational indeed!!
@Sathish-you are very good in interpreting thoughts and lines in poem.Thanks for the motivational words.
ReplyDelete@Arti-Arti truly inspirational you are.....thanks.
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