Monday, December 27, 2010

Goodbye2010 And Welcome 2011








Unwinding old thoughts
Coming up with the new ideas
Rejuvenating my own soul


Blessings of New Year waiting ahead
A knock on the door
Will be heard soon

Cyclone of thoughts calming down
Chirping of birds
Sounds distinctly
Stirred thoughts to proper consistency
Dissolving the unsolved matters
Transparency is yet to be achieved
But the process is going on
Music sounds relaxing to hear
Senses working even better
Jolted mish mash cleared up
Life seems to be better
Breathing pattern improved

Smile wants to spend life on lips
Tears said goodbye
Song on lips started with humming
Hesitated to enjoy
From fear of losing it

Want to hug New Year
With a hope of happiness around
With a hope of becoming a better person

Lets say goodbye and thanks to 2010
And welcome New Year 2011

Wish you all a very happy new year

This post is written for BLOGESHWAR (link to the facebook page) and Anubhooti (link to anubhooti.com)
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42 comments:

  1. Beyond HorizonDecember 28, 2010 at 12:27 AM

    you got the answers for the questions in your last post...very much inspiring and motivating...

    "Smile wants to spend life on lips"...LOVELY

    HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU :)

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  2. Sathish KumarDecember 28, 2010 at 6:59 AM

    //Stirred thoughts to proper consistency
    Dissolving the unsolved matters
    Transparency is yet to be achieved
    But the process is going on//

    Wow....Beautiful thoughts...!
    And, you turned them into words excellently..!

    These four lines have
    Pains of Past (Stirred thoughts),
    Attempts on Present (Dissolving),
    Aim on mind about future (Transparency),
    Confidence to win the situations (Going on).

    Pratibha..! Amazed literally...!


    //Life seems to be better
    Breathing pattern improved//

    Have given a Dr's touch here too...!


    Happy New Year to you too, Pratibha!!!

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  3. eyeographyDecember 28, 2010 at 9:27 AM

    Lovely post...

    "Unwinding old thoughts
    Coming up with the new ideas
    Rejuvenating my own soul"..

    This is brilliant.. :)

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  4. ArpanaDecember 28, 2010 at 10:58 AM

    May the all wishes blossom at their best! Heartiest and warm wishes to you!

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  5. magiceyeDecember 28, 2010 at 8:50 PM

    love the positivity in the post!

    all the best wishes for the new year!!

    cheers!!

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  6. Dr. Pratibha SinghDecember 28, 2010 at 9:06 PM

    Thanks Poonam for the support and glad you liked my earlier post and this one too.

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  7. Dr. Pratibha SinghDecember 28, 2010 at 9:09 PM

    @Satish kumar-very intelligently and thoughtfully you elaborated the embedded meaning of my poem.glad you just don't read through eyes and very few people are blessed with that kind of vision and understanding.god bless you and thanks a ton for appreciating beyond words.

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  8. Dr. Pratibha SinghDecember 28, 2010 at 9:10 PM

    @Sumit-thanks for the appreciation and glad you believed in it.

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  9. Dr. Pratibha SinghDecember 28, 2010 at 9:12 PM

    @Arpana and Magiceye-My heartiest wishes are always with you and thanks for inspiring me and I feel great when you people appreciate.

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  10. Nalini HebbarDecember 28, 2010 at 9:43 PM

    Lovely poem Prathiba!
    Happy New Year to you!

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  11. Lakshmi RajanDecember 28, 2010 at 10:04 PM

    Good bye 2010 and welcome to a brand new decade. Have a wonderful years ahead!

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  12. Dr. Pratibha SinghDecember 28, 2010 at 10:05 PM

    Thanks Mam ,Happy New Year to you too.

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  13. Dr. Pratibha SinghDecember 28, 2010 at 10:05 PM

    Thanks Lakshmi Rajan and wish you a great year ahead.

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  14. Manish VermaDecember 29, 2010 at 5:28 AM

    happy new year pratibha

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  15. Nandita PrakashDecember 29, 2010 at 5:38 AM

    hey pls dnt mind me saying this but u shouldnt have been a Doc. u write really well sweety.
    happy new year
    i m glad that i dropped by to chk this post
    really sweet

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  16. Dr. Pratibha SinghDecember 29, 2010 at 5:43 AM

    Happy New Year Mag.

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  17. Dr. Pratibha SinghDecember 29, 2010 at 5:45 AM

    @Nandita-glad you visited and thats a huge compliment I must say.I am already following you for your writing skills and would love to see you again commenting on my posts.thanks!

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  18. Geeta SinghDecember 29, 2010 at 5:47 AM

    happy new year dear

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  19. Dr. Pratibha SinghDecember 29, 2010 at 6:56 AM

    Happy New Year SIS.

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  20. ArtiDecember 29, 2010 at 7:14 AM

    'With a hope of becoming a better person'
    Wow... so much cheer and goodness...
    Wish you a very Happy New Year :)

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  21. Shri Ram AyyangarDecember 29, 2010 at 7:50 AM

    Happy New Year and nice change in blog background.

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  22. Dr. Pratibha SinghDecember 29, 2010 at 8:54 PM

    Thanks Arti for appreciation; wishes and wish you the same.

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  23. Dr. Pratibha SinghDecember 29, 2010 at 8:56 PM

    Thanks for noticing it and wish you a very Happy New Year Sir.

    @Muskan-Happy New Year to you too.

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  24. Harish P IDecember 29, 2010 at 9:49 PM

    wish you a very happy 2011

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  25. AnonymousDecember 29, 2010 at 10:34 PM

    Simply Beautiful!

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  26. Dr. Pratibha SinghDecember 29, 2010 at 10:42 PM

    Thanks Ruhisonal for appreciating my poem.

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  27. Dr. Pratibha SinghDecember 29, 2010 at 10:42 PM

    @Harish-same to you.

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  28. RanjDecember 30, 2010 at 1:32 AM

    Happy New Year Prathiba. May 2011 brings all the best and beautiful things to you and your loved ones!! CHEERS!!!

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  29. Dr. Pratibha SinghDecember 30, 2010 at 3:17 AM

    same to you Kranjini and thanks fore the wishes.

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  30. VivekDecember 31, 2010 at 6:58 AM

    Hi Pratibha,

    Thanks for the inspiring comments , wow you have given such a great outlook on leaving 2010 and the upcoming big 2011 via a nice poem , loved it beauty and nature connect.

    Wish you and your family a very Happy and prosperous new year 2011.

    Take care
    Keep smiling :)
    Vivek

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  31. Dr. Pratibha SinghDecember 31, 2010 at 11:07 PM

    @vivek-Thanks for the appreciation and wish you and your family a very Happy New Year 2011.

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  32. MuddassirShahJanuary 8, 2011 at 7:59 AM

    Pratibha,
    Happy new year to you too :)

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  33. SJanuary 9, 2011 at 9:14 AM

    This is one of the best New Year post I've read around, I loved the last two lines.

    Keep writing, and wishing you luck and success for the year :)

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  34. Dr. Pratibha SinghJanuary 9, 2011 at 10:46 PM

    great to hear such words;Wish you a very happy new year and happy blogging.

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  35. Dr. Pratibha SinghJanuary 9, 2011 at 10:47 PM

    Happy new year Muddaisir.

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  36. Sarah malikJanuary 10, 2011 at 8:05 AM

    great thought, my post is somewhat similar to urs but i loved ur poem more :)
    good luck for the contest..may the new year bring in lots of happy moments in ur life!

    sarah

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  37. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2011 at 10:05 AM

    quite a refreshing poem.. much optimism n life.. god bless u n have a fantastic year ahead..

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  38. Dr. Pratibha SinghJanuary 11, 2011 at 9:03 PM

    @subtlescribbler-thanks dear and wish you the same.

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  39. Dr. Pratibha SinghJanuary 11, 2011 at 11:49 PM

    @easyvivek-thanks for the appreciation and great wishes.Happy New Year to you too.

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  40. ओमीJanuary 14, 2011 at 12:36 AM

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  41. ओमीJanuary 14, 2011 at 12:37 AM

    Liked it :) happy new year to u too

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  42. Dr. Pratibha SinghJanuary 19, 2011 at 9:20 PM

    thanks Omi.

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